staccato notes swirl
round two hiding
between bar lines
attempting a grand
staff she a trembling
treble he a bold bass
together no rests just
a half note plus a half note
trying to make a whole
I have bits of theory floating about in my brain from two years of piano (years ago). My brother, however, is the composer/pianist/theorist/everything!!!! Thanks for coming on over and have a wonderful week as well!
Pamanner 
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bless your weekend.
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thanks Jingle! blessings xo
dum dee dum.. piano jargon not fully comprehended but nevertheless you did a good job! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/
🙂 Well, my theory is not wonderful but I remember a bit! Thanks for sharing!
Like the last two lines. 🙂
thanks 🙂
lovely metaphors 🙂
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thanks so much!
Nice poem with a lovely flow
Thank-you!
Love the last line! Transcends the boundaries of music and stands true for many things in life. Loved reading you!
Thanks! You got it! 🙂
love the message,
half=half to make a whole,
wow.
A++
🙂
Thanks Jingle 🙂
I’m not a music person as such, so didn’t get the whole poem. but I enjoyed the versing still 🙂
My Potluck Post. It’s Random This Time.
Vinay, thanks for stopping by and sharing your poem! 🙂
I loved this one! A beautiful music to life comparison. 🙂
Thanks Rachel!!!! 🙂
Pam, do you know music as well? I wish all definition were like this instead of wordy and inane phrases. Pam, have a lovely week ahead.
Joy always,
Susan
Susan,
I have bits of theory floating about in my brain from two years of piano (years ago). My brother, however, is the composer/pianist/theorist/everything!!!! Thanks for coming on over and have a wonderful week as well!
xo,
Pam
a relationship coming to be….2 half notes becoming one…..As always…XOXOXO
🙂 Bonnie, love you!
Beautiful I actually got it yay!
I am a bass man!
Cheers A
Nice A! Someday, I’ll be a bass woman lol. My brother played and I’m intrigued by the bass guitar. 🙂