you are movement always
changing torn by gravitation’s
effects moon earth sun
time scales years or hours fluctuate
forceful oscillating currents that
reverse or cease
underwater bathymetry and
coastlines tease play with you
yet you remain mostly untapped
energy unable to be harnessed your
strength not bridled I ride you
nights bathed in silver light
swept along by your haste your
determination galactic vigor set in
motion I am unable to resist
my nautical charts dampened
unreadable I succumb to your ebb
flow and biological rhythms
© Pamela A. Rossow
This is really lovely. A love letter with many layers.
Awh, yes, it was. Thanks for reading!
Good thing you have here! I actually love how it is easy on my eyes as well as the details are well written. I am wondering how I could be notified whenever a new post has been made. I have subscribed to your rss feed which really should do the trick! Have a good day!
thanks and yes that should do it!
thank-you!!!!!! 😛
Nice flow:)
thanks Vishwas!
A heated love with the ocean :). Nicely done.
why thank-you 🙂 yes, much passion on my part!
I love the mythic tone of this– nice write!
thanks so much!
I like the way you wrote it.
thanks
an unseen concept. rather untouched..:)
thank-you. . .
Wonderful, makes me feel like I am at the beach and watching the power and glory of the tides around my area. Quite the flow with this offering, almost the sense of being overwhelmed even if I am not harms way. Thank you so much for sharing!
thank-you 🙂 I live in a great location for tide watching
As do I, gotta love Santa Cruz, California lol
yes!!!! similar to FL!!!!
This is really lovely, because you’ve given life to something that is unliving (although that is somewhat debatable). The movement of the tides gives it life. I love this poem.
thank-you so much. . .I have an on-going love affair with the ocean 🙂
welcome in, linked you up along with fellow participants..
read the list, let me know after you are done 18 comments..
Glad that you post on daily basis…
I read and posted already! Enjoyed it!
agree!
amazing writing..
well composed emotions…love the imagery your words paint.
I invite you to attend poets rally week 35, where you share your poetry and make new poetic friends…poetry awards are assigned upon completion.
let me know when you are ready.
Merry Christmas…
Stay Blessed….
Hi! Thank-you. I’d love to join in! I write daily so let me know what to do! Thanks and Merry Christmas!