she forgot to
remember
“safe” the
feeling of
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
a catch before
the thud she
knew earth
too well
© Pamela Rossow
she forgot to
remember
“safe” the
feeling of
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
a catch before
the thud she
knew earth
too well
© Pamela Rossow
“she knew earth too well”
haha, -> my amused, knowing feeling reaction…i know it is sad but in a amusing sort of way. That thud is more cushiony because of how “safe” appears to still hold on =) sorry if i’m not making sense…great poem =)
Awh, yes, I know what you mean. That’s why I wrote it! Well, in this case, “safe” didn’t hold on and it was a hard thud! Bruises do heal though!
Ooh, there is great feeling in this piece! It is simple but poignant.
Thanks, Jessica!